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Abnegation. Amity. Candor. Dauntless. Erudite. 5 Factions. Some will fit one. Some will be Factionless. Some will be Divergent.


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1Lights Charries Empty Lights Charries Mon Jan 13, 2014 12:32 am

Lightning



.:Active:.

Loki Olden:

Ash Pagenstone:

Logan Walker:

Sebastian Sicarian:










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2Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Mon Jan 13, 2014 12:35 am

Lightning



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\\Cursory information//
Name:

Loki - "Twelve" - Ordens

Age:
16

Birthday:
June 3rd

Gender:
Male

\\Faction Information//
Family:

Doesn't matter, you aren't supposed to be attached.
Father - James
Mother - Shari

Original Faction:
Candor

Faction Transfered To:
Dauntless  

\\Personal Information//
Brief History:

Loki always struggled to be honest, it wasn't like he always lied, he just enjoyed it. Loki was a mischievous person, always getting into trouble, but always lying about it being his fault. He never blamed anyone, he just said he didn't know who did it. Most of the time it was that easy, but if someone saw him do it, there was always a crossroads where he would deny it, and the other person would blame him, but since they were both Candor, it was never solved. Loki used to get into fist fights later in schooling years, but they happened more frequently than not. He tries every now and then to find a way to condition his fighting so he didn't always have his ass kicked.

Physical Appearance:
Loki is average height for his age, standing around 6' he has a slim but fit build. With his moderate shoulders and defined narrow hips and long legs, Loki looks slim and toned. Loki sags all of his pants, because he is usually wearing bright colored undies that he likes to show off. His stomach isn't necessarily toned into abs, but it has a hard feel to them. He styles his brown hair with a quiff and keeps a smile on his face. He doesn't have the tannest skin, but not the palest either, but the mixture seems just right to bring out his Blue eyes.


Personality:
Loki is cocky, and extremely flirtatious to everyone. He loves meeting new people, and talking to anyone he possibly can. Loki usually holds himself as just another guy, and makes witty comments, has a big mouthed temper, and an easy way to cool off. He loves food, so if you bake him anything you will automatically make him love you.

Flaws:
Loki doesn't have a filter between his lips and his mouth, causing him make any remark he sees fit without regard to the effects on the people around him. He tends to burn more bridges than he can mend.

Talents:
He has gotten into plenty of fights at school, so he can take care of himself when it comes to close combat. Granted he isn't the best fighter in the world, but can stay on his feet in almost any fight.

Other:
gay



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3Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Mon Jan 13, 2014 11:24 pm

Magpie

Magpie

Hi Light! Welcome to DivergentRP! Razz I do have a few things to note about your first character before I (or another staff member) can accept him, so please edit the things listed below and we'll be right on track. Smile

1. There wouldn't be any paintball or combat training places in Candor, and I was under the impression he hadn't actually switched to Dauntless yet. You could say he just like trained as best he could using random stuff as punching bags or whatever, got into fights at school for practice, just something that doesn't require apparatus that Candor would probably not possess. Razz

2. You seem to have replaced 'flaw' with 'fear.' While a fear is allowed and I might actually add it to the character template for dauntless people, he also needs a flaw. (Also, he would have to have more than the fear of having a fear if he were in Dauntless because I think it was uncommon for Four to have only four fears, so only one would be like... not possible, at least not before he's even switched to Dauntless. But you don't have to change that since he seems to still be in Candor.)

3. Just that, again, in talents, he wouldn't have gone to a range to train in Candor because they wouldn't have had one. You could just say something like he's really strong, or he's gotten into fights at school before and knows what he's doing, or whatever. See #1. He probably wouldn't have had opportunities to use a gun either, but you could just say it was a natural talent.

Please change these little things and someone will come along and accept him! Thanks!


4Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Tue Jan 14, 2014 12:02 am

Lightning



I fixed it... I think.
And just to state my point, that Candor does have a combat thing...
Edward was one of the transfer from Candor and it said he had studied close combat for some time (I think it was like a few years) anyways, both Peter and Edward are from the same Faction because, Tris's friend tells her about the four of them growing up together and how Peter used to pick fights with the other kids and then blame them, and since he was a Candor it meant he couldn't lie, so the other kid got into trouble. SO since Peter and Edward grew up together, that usually means in the same Faction, and since we know Peter was Candor(as it stated several times) we can have a comfortable amount of evidence that Edward was part of Candor as well, where he trained in combat. However I already went ahead and changed it.

Now for the whole fear thing, I understand the whole four thing being an issue too, so I guess I can change that. But Now I need a new nick name...

5Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Tue Jan 14, 2014 10:30 pm

Magpie

Magpie

Yup, as we discussed briefly on THG chat, sorry about that. Loki is accepted. Nice character!

6Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:17 am

Lightning



Haha yeah Razz And thanks!!

7Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Wed Jan 15, 2014 2:26 am

Lightning



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\\Cursory information//
Name:

Ash Pagenstone

Age:
18

Birthday:
November 24th

Gender:
Male

\\Faction Information//
Family:

Mother and a Father, although they didnt show up on visiting day. He also has a brother but he decided to stay in Dauntless

Original Faction:
Dauntless

Faction Transfered To:
Candor

\\Personal Information//
Brief History:

Honestly, Ash doesn't actually tell the Truth. He just can't find it in himself to always say it. He is more of a compulsive liar than anything, and he felt like this was something he felt like he had to do. He loves to hang around people, and to speak and chat with the Candor's because they were fun people to hang around. Not to mention you always had a honest opinion from everyone you hung out with. He decided that his life would be, less wrecked or stressed than it is now, if He changed to something new. Instead of going to Abernation he decided that he wants to go with people he knows, so he picked the same Faction as the majority of his friends.

Physical Appearance:
Ash stands about 5' 7.5" and has lanky muscles. His tan skin is framed with dark brown hair with green eyes. He has earrings but they are small dark diamonds that almost blend into nothing from a distance. He has a toned body, and a long torso. Coming from Dauntless, he has a Bella Donna tattoo on the inside of his lower left arm, winding up to his elbow. He got it because it reminds him that even beautiful things can be the deadliest of them all.

Personality:
Ash is a nice kid, but he is a compulsive liar. Usually lying his way out of things, he see Candor as a way to not be doubted anymore whether he is telling the truth or not. He loves to meet people, and usually hangs out with friends on his free time, doing stupid stuff because he is a Dauntless at heart.Along with loving to do stupid stuff, Ash has the love of lies, it gives him a rush of adrenaline every time because there is always the possibility that he could get caught

Flaws:
Compulsive Liar, and see as he is going into Candor, it will uh, be fun.

Talents:
Ash has the abilities and the talents that most Dauntless kids hav, so sneaking through the dark and close combat skills. He has the ability to keep himself well fit and seemingly normal.

Other:
Closeted Gay



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8Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Fri Jan 17, 2014 4:04 am

Lightning



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\\Cursory information//
Name:
Sebastian Sicarian  

Age:
19

Birthday:
April 20th

Gender:
Male

\\Faction Information//
Family:
Mother died at birth
Father works as a Leader, the one who hired him to begin with.

Original Faction:
Dauntless

Faction Transferred To:
Dauntless

\\Personal Information//
Brief History:
Sebastian walked through the dark fields of the Paintball turf. several players of his team were already out, and the flag had been taken but the game was still a foot. Bast smiled loading his custom made paintball Hand guns. He had found them one day under a collapsed building while doing a run for more ammo for the games. He had found the two of them attached to a belt or something similar, however the object was to eroded from time. He had them now though, and that's all he cared for. Loading a clip of 16 shots into both guns, and slipping them into the side holsters he took off at a jog towards the sewer drains.

At the sewer entrance Bast looked left, and saw to of his comrades ready to go in. Giving a slight nod, He followed the two into the fight scene. The first one got shot immediately, where as the second took cover. One of the opposite team members saw Bast, and thought he'd make a snide comment about how Bast did as much good as a knife when it came to a gun fight. Sebastian got upset quickly, his hot temper kicking in he stood up, drawing his long solid black knife out of his back pocket. Someone shot at Bast, but he swiveled to the side, and it sailed by harmlessly. Another shot a bullet, Bast brought his hand down and knocked the bullet to the side. His partner jumped out to shoot, but ended up in the path of another shot. Throwing his knife with a prayer of luck, the tip pierced the ball and saved the guys life. However, several more shot smacked against his chest, and Sebastian ran for cover.

two more guys came around the corner, Bast knew, that if they didn't shoot him, they'd take him prisoner. Who knows what they would so to get to the flag. He breathed deep, and checked his ammo case, barely anything left, which was weird because he couldn't remember where he shot all of his ammo at. A guy whipping aro-und the corner snapped him out of his gaze, as he paintball smashed against the forehead he turned to find several guys surrounding him. Someone ordered him to drop his weapons, which were empty now anyways. He dropped them, and slid one over the floor, and was searched as he put his hands on his head. The closest guard found his second one, and stuck it in his own hip holster. "Looks like its mine now, punk", was the quip that set Sebastian off.

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Dropping his hands, Bast punched a kid in the face, and flipped him over on his back, knocking him unconscious. He kicked the snob who stole his gun in the stomach and grabbed him in a choke hold, making sure he squeezed tight. He grabbed his gun from the hip holster and aimed it at the heads of each individual left standing in the room. By the time the first one was down, all had been shot, and a total of 12 bullets had passed, 6 of which hit the man he was holding. Spinning the kid around and out of his way he holstered his gun, and walked deeper into the sewers to find the flag. He breathed, and realized that his training he had his entire life had just kicked in, and saved him the game and earned him some respect. Even though he didn't get the flag, he still felt like he won that game, rather than anyone else, because he realized he can trust his body to do its natural thing.

Physical Appearance:
Sebastian has dark colored hair, and tan skin. He stands about 6 foot flat and is extremely well toned. Bast has a dark presence about him along with a wide range of weapons. He wears dark clothing and has dark earrings and several tattoos on his back. He has thin eyebrows and a set jaw line with high cheek bones, and fine lips.

Personality:
Sebastian became solitary, suspicious, and practical. He was always wary of everyone, from strangers to his closest friends, and his suspicion made him a great killer, since he was practical to the point of ruthlessness in this regard, killing anyone he deemed a threat with minimal hesitation or remorse, and an attitude that was almost casual. This made him the almost perfect solider, unless he turned on his friends. Sebastian was also very intelligent and strong-willed, he is always prepared to be imprisoned, tortured, and confined at all times, but is trained not to give in.

Sebastian was a quick learner, becoming literate and an advanced swordsman in a very short period of time. However, he was often hasty, lightheaded, and impulsive though he improved upon the last two traits. He was also known to lose his temper, and let his frustration get the better of him. Along with his impulsiveness came his most prominent trait, his curiosity; Sebastian he was always asking questions, always seeking to learn more in the ways of combat or how to effectively get something done.

Flaw:
Sebastian is always afraid that he is never good enough for almost anyone. This is why he takes it upon himself to go the extra mile, and the extra distance to make anyone happy. including his employers

Talents:
He can shoot a gun pretty effectively, and has great close combat skills. He had asked for personal training form several of the Dauntless who passed, and mastered it before the end of Imitation. He is great with both a sword and his empty hands, although he prefers a sword more. He can formulate exit strategy's and ways to kill someone without being detected almost on the spot, and he has leadership skills to direct a team, but is mostly solitary.

Other:
Sebastian is a Divergent, but he is also hired out by the Leaders of the nation to kill the Divergent as they pose a "threat" to the way things are now. So he keeps the whole Divergent part to himself, and stays in his job of assassinating to keep the trail off of himself.

~Not divergent yet I'll buy it when it comes out etc~

FC:
Dylan Labelle



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9Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Sat Jan 18, 2014 7:20 pm

Lightning



Lights Charries Alex-pettyfer-533550916

\\Cursory information//
.:Name:.

Logan Walker

.:Age:.
16

.:Birthday:
July 27th older twin with Sor

.:Gender:.
Male

\\Faction Information//
.:Family:.

Dad - Leader of faction is a major player.
Mother died during childbirth
Jet - Older brother age 22
Alice - Twin sister age 16
Katie - older sister age - 18

.:Original Faction:.
Candor

.:Faction Transfered To:.
Dauntless

\\Personal Information//
.:Brief History:.

Logans mom died before he ever go to know her. He keeps hearing stories about how she was pretty and caring and loving. He wished he could remember her or even know what she was like to feel. The same goes with his father, from what he understands is that his father died with his mother, not literally. However his Fathers spirit was broken and he became closed off, until He started going to the parties, and becoming a Player with the women. Back at his house there was always attractive girls hanging out, looking for money or a place to stay. Ever since he could Remember Logan had always been with his family, especially his sister, Alice. He loves his family to death, but Loves to be risky even more and plans to join dauntless and train under his brother.

.:Physical Appearance:.
Logan is described as being a strikingly good looking 15 year old boy, with fair hair and a handsome slender face that would “attract plenty of girls.” He also has serious brown eyes and a slightly hard, narrow mouth. Logan is well built and slim with a slight tan, he is described as having “the body of an athlete”. He is 5’7” tall and he weighs 120 pounds. By the time of Initiation, however,he's grown to be 5'10", and while still slim, but has filled out considerably. Logan has a birthmark on his left shoulder, and he mostly wears casual clothing such as baggy jeans and hoodies along with a wooden bead necklace given to him by his dad.

.:Personality:.
He has a good-hearted personality, with a good sense of humor, He often aims bits of snarkery and dry mockery at his enemies despite the danger that he is in. He purposefully does this because he knows that people make more mistakes when they're angry. Logan is extremely self-sacrificing and selfless a person, always willing to give himself up for his friends or family. He is also sarcastic and frequently angers those around him with a cutting remark, but Logan still cares very much for people.

.:Flaw:.
He can be Very impulsive

.:Talents:.
Logan is impulsive but also extremely smart. He likes to formulate plans that are risky but definitely worth it if it works out. Logan seems to have a large amount of luck on his side too, whether that be good luck or bad luck, he still has it with him. He is also a fighter but isn't the worlds best in the beginning but can hold his won, given that he studies and strategies against everyone he meets.

.:Other:.
Nothing... For now!

.:Face Claim:.
Alex Pettyfer



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10Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Sun Jan 19, 2014 12:19 am

Magpie

Magpie

Logan is accepted, Ash needs one more persona sentence. Razz

11Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Sun Jan 19, 2014 2:11 am

Lightning



Edited finished Sebastian

12Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:56 am

Magpie

Magpie

Ash is accepted. Sebastian is accepted as well, but he can't be a Divergent right now so please just have him be normal until we get all that going, and please don't go overboard with the assassin thing. (Basically, it's allowed, just try to keep it realistic. Razz Thanks!)

13Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:59 am

Lightning



Oh yeah, I wasn't going to.... and I fixed that part... I'll keep it realistic, and it wont happen often. Smile thanks guys!!

14Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Mon Jan 20, 2014 3:11 am

Lightning



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\\Cursory information//
.:Name:.

Alexander Pierce

.:Age:.
17

.:Birthday:
November 20th

.:Gender:.
Male

\\Faction Information//
.:Family:.

James Pierce - Dad (Factionless)
Martha Pierce - Mother

.:Original Faction:.
Dauntless

.:Faction Transfered To:.
Amity

\\Personal Information//
.:Brief History:.

Alex had an abusive mother. His father had been out of the picture for as long as he could remember and Martha, his mom, was an alcoholic. She didn't score very high on her test skills and got some of the worse jobs that Dauntless could think about. Martha had let it slip once that he was a screw up from a drunk night and the factionless. She was always telling him that he was an accident, or that he made her life miserable. He had felt inferior his entire life, until he had the chance to leave and go to Amity, where it was basically the promised land of peace.

.:Physical Appearance:.
Blue eyes and almost black hair, Alex is the type of guy that everyone likes. He has Bright blue eyes and thin eyebrows. Alex has rounded ears and a medium nose. Standing only at 5'4 he is a short stocky build, which is speckled with scars white with age. He is normally found in a tank top and shorts, and barefoot. The part that Alex likes the most about himself, is his tan. He is tan everywhere, the tops of his feet, on his thighs and even on the bottom of his hands. Usually found in a tree, he is sometimes found with dirt on his face and hands, but seems to smell like Pine all the time.

.:Personality:.
Alex is a good-natured person which is why he joined Amity. He is one for doing crazy things since it is in his blood from being in Dauntless his entire life. He loves to climb trees because he loves the view, and has a deep yearning for exploring the surrounding areas. Alex is as Curious as a cat, and it causes him to become blind too dangers around him and others. He has several out of the blue comments, and has no ability to understand or identify with personal boundaries and awkward situations.

.:Flaws:.
He misses the life of being Dauntless and being a rush, So its hard for him to give up on that. This idea of always being part of Dauntless causes him to take stupid and life risking risks. He doesn't really think before he acts, and he doesn't respond well to the negative consequences.

.:Talents:.
Alex is a swift climber and he can go up a tree almost as fast as a monkey who had grown up in them his whole life. He is a quick thinker and a well trained fighter. He has a great curiosity and a fast tongue giving him a gift to get out of issues easily.

.:Other:.
N/A

.:Face Claim:.
Sean O'Donnell



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15Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Mon Jan 20, 2014 3:26 am

Magpie

Magpie

Please expand on his flaw(s) and he'll be good to go. Razz

16Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Tue Feb 04, 2014 8:00 pm

Lightning



fixed!! sorry about the inactivity, I had power issues!

17Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Wed Feb 05, 2014 1:16 am

Magpie

Magpie

Accepted!

18Lights Charries Empty Re: Lights Charries Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:52 pm

Lightning



Thanks!

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